Saturday, May 16, 2009

burnt rice

oh man.
it was a good one
burnt into a complete solid
smoke filled rooms
blame
couldn't you smell it
didn't you ever burn anything before
you don't know how tired I am
sorry.

4 comments:

MacrinaQuin said...

I know those days....

alice c said...

Oh! I sympathise - I HATE burning things - and the smell of burned toast makes me want to emigrate.

elizabeth said...

poetry of daily life.

wishing rest to you.

Kassianni said...

these poems sort of remind me of scott cairns.

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